Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1
Jazzie! Think about what you're doing! And I scoff at that.
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
Oh dear fate.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
But apprentices can't go on patrol without a warrior...
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
OMGBBQ!11!11!!!!1
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.
... Wait, what? So, she clawed one cat and he ran off, reasonable enough... Not really, but I'm streaching my expectations... But she scratches ONE and they ALL flee the scene? I call bull.
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.
thnkx and ples no more flams
ALL OF THE FLAMES.
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1
Jazzie! Think about what you're doing! And I scoff at that.
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
Oh dear fate.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
But apprentices can't go on patrol without a warrior...
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
OMGBBQ!11!11!!!!1
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.
... Wait, what? So, she clawed one cat and he ran off, reasonable enough... Not really, but I'm streaching my expectations... But she scratches ONE and they ALL flee the scene? I call bull.
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.
thnkx and ples no more flams
ALL OF THE FLAMES.