ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz
Oh dear. This is going to be painful, isn't it?
Chpater oen prouloge
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
I read some sentences. They were choppy. I was not pleased. I wanted to quit.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
I wonder what it means?!
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
Woah, wait. How did we determine this is about Starkit? Nothing was said of that... Also, how did we determine that she has UNBELIEVABLE POWER? All that was said was that stars will vanquish the evil tiger and holly. Also, why is one of the cats golden?
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
But Jayfeather is a medicine cat, shouldn't he be at the Moonpool?
did u like it? plz tell me in urm review!
I'm kinda scared of what comes next...
Oh dear. This is going to be painful, isn't it?
Chpater oen prouloge
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
I read some sentences. They were choppy. I was not pleased. I wanted to quit.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
I wonder what it means?!
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
Woah, wait. How did we determine this is about Starkit? Nothing was said of that... Also, how did we determine that she has UNBELIEVABLE POWER? All that was said was that stars will vanquish the evil tiger and holly. Also, why is one of the cats golden?
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
But Jayfeather is a medicine cat, shouldn't he be at the Moonpool?
did u like it? plz tell me in urm review!
I'm kinda scared of what comes next...